October 3, 2013
Question:
Hi Donna,I have been receiving your emails and I appreciate them. I have been a slow adopter of Linkedin. Finally, I am now 110% into it.
I want to rewrite my profile, my question is now this…
Do I write first person or third?
–Stephen
Answer:
Hi Stephen!
I deeply believe that a powerful LinkedIn profile is written in first person narrative form.
Why?
LinkedIn is ultimately a Social Network. Social Networks are all about you interacting with your network. And since your network will check out your profile, it’s imperative that what they read is from YOUR PEN. You want to be SOCIABLE… don’t push people away by creating distance between you and your reader. Draw them in by writing in first person. In fact, I also use second person because it brings your reader in even closer by speaking directly to them.
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–Donna
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Love how “About the Author” is then written in the 3rd person…#practisewhatyoupreach
Hi Kurt! I do practice what I preach… that’s the “About the Author” bio— not a LinkedIn profile summary.
Hi Donna,
I agree that a LinkedIn profile should be in first person. But judging by the comment above, looks like you feel an author bio should be third person?
What do you think?
thanks,
pragati
Bios are typically written in third person. I use third person on my bio here on my Website to make it easy for people to share my posts and information. By having it in third person, a person who may want to quote me can easily copy and paste the bio to their site.
Do note that on my About page, I use first person.
I find your tips very helpful. Thank you for sharing.